The Pleasure of Pain..!! {click }

Every other person wants to find somebody to love and to be loved in return.you will probably do a lot of changing and growing,before you are ready for a permanent relationship.slowly the chemistry between two creature becomes unbelievable,two people who like each other and who are attracted to each other share special feelings. However, to some people things do not work according to how they want it to be.

so here is One side of the story...

It seems impossible to believe that a person you felt so close who does not feel the same way anymore. it hurts to know you are not as important as you once were.
one of the hardest questions to face when it comes to break-up is "why"? it is often a question with no simple answer. sometimes that big question ... why? can keep you from moving on with your life...
one minute crying because i had a good thing with her and i blew it. next min i hate her so much i wish she`d die. spending sleepless nights just longing for her.sometimes quizzing friends asking her where about, sometimes spying, at last all i came to know was she has moved on...
friends will probably want to make me feel better. but it is not easy to let go off your past.
remembering the good times you had with your ex becomes less painful and more pleasant
after sometime has passed. it took a while ,but i have stopped.i do not go to sleep thinking all about her,i have stopped replaying every argument in my head.i spent so much time crying and feeling lonely and blaming myself... the only thing i often say to myself is .. i am not bad i am just drawn that way....
its nice to look forward to things again, for a change. now when i feel sad or lonely,i know it wont last forever.

"there are certain things,you cannot share with everybody........Yet at times,it just flows"

© Nabeel.

{The above written post is a work of Fiction }

17 comments:

Ipsita Shome said...

Now I read the entire post, but still have the same view as I had after reading an excerpt from it. It always comes straight from your heart Nabeel. It again crossed my mind that it might be a real life incident. The credit goes to your skill of writing for making me think that way. Again and again. Keep updating :)

Prasanna said...

I can only hope that is fiction. Well written and true in many senses. Good luck with you new blog!

KARTHI said...

Remarkable, ur work of fiction is as good as real incident.. :) good one...

deepak said...

Nabeel, u claim that this is a piece of fiction. I hope so. Coz the pain, the stages of feelings post breakup are so palpable. Good job!!

bindaasviti said...

i really, really hope its fiction too..
its written well..you've probably been close to someone who went through this..
feelings are always raw after such a thing and then gradually, the cliche that time heals everything, takes over..
keep writing my dear :)

Ami said...

Well written.
Fiction - I dont accept ;)

Raghav said...

The so called fiction has in it, the residue of life: A uniting spirit and a seperating reality. I like the end.

nabeel said...

Thank you very much guys!!

yes,its a work of fiction based on the observation of how people tend to react after going through such phase :)

Thanks Once again..Nope,i have not been through such phase and would never like to go as well..

Sharmila said...

Loved it!

lifeisbetter said...

Hmm... Feel the innocence of the cutest baby (in your blog) and the complications of our mature minds (when he grows up)... The complications are anything but natural and obvious, thats even worse.

Blue Panther said...

If this is a work of fiction it captures the mood of a recently broken up person quite well. Hope and wish you never have to go through something like this for real. :-)

Zeba said...

I think to answer the 'Why?', you also need to consider the other side, right? Why is it that you stop having feelings for someone? There is really no answer I suppose. But that's just how feelings are...they change... be it from your side or from the other person's side. They change and inexplicably so. You can't do nothing about it other than moving on...

Jyo Had3s said...

Well, you know my views :D but these are yours... and i respect that. Goes very well with your personality, as Blue Panther said, Hope and Wish you never have to go through something like this for real.

libran_aman said...

No, not a fiction coz my frnds have gone thru this phase...and it's funny how someone can break your heart and you still love them with all the little pieces!! To know when to go away n when to come closer is the key to any lastin relationship...

well written, Nabeel. keep updating :)

ms.parker said...

Like I said, I could really relate to this. This is so well written, it just feels like it's come right out of a heartbroken person's mind. And for that, I really wish this isn't true.
Very well written.
x

Deepshikha Chatterjee said...

Very well written...I could relate to it!! And I am glad that it is a work of fiction.A break up is probably the worst thing that can happen especially when a person has been in a relatiionship for many years

Culinary Muse said...

Simple, true and very inspiring!

 

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